第二节负能量批判型
6. 雾霾
directions:
write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay, you should
1. describe the drawing briefly,
2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
3. give your comments.
you should write neatly on the answer sheet.
审题及提纲
图像中的一男一女佩戴着夸大的大口罩，面临面站着却在伸头张望，由文字提示可知，他们看不清彼此。这不由使人联想到迩来很抢手的空气污染疑问：雾霾。众所周知，雾霾会对人体安康构成损害，这也正是图中二人均佩戴口罩的缘由——避免吸入pm2.5。文章的主题由此树立。考生可先对其时的空气情况进行描绘，然后偏重论说空气污染对人体安康构成的损害并分析构成污染的缘由。
第一段：描绘图像。先对细节打开描绘，留心需呈现有关雾霾的描绘性语句。比方，对二者佩戴口罩的描绘以及近在天边却无法看清彼此的描绘。然后引出图像所反映的疑问。
第二段：联系实际，充分延展。先描绘当今雾霾的情况，可给出有关查询或报导中的数据加以佐证，由此引出雾霾的损害性，最终引申到雾霾的成因。
第三段：总结谈论。呼吁我们为了本身安康维护环境。
经典模板范文
under the haze stand a male and a female who are wearing masks respectively, being apart for only just a half meter. they are stretching their heads, seemingly to find something. after a long, hard stare, they ultimately find that it is a person who stands opposite. apparently, a murky haze swallows us around the corner.
the picture ironically illustrates how terrible air pollution is. sadly as it is, the phenomenon in the picture is a daily reality. a survey conducted by china environmental protection association shows that the average reading of pm2.5 in major cities of china is hundreds times higher than that in developed countries. such horrible air conditions are posing a threat to our health and fitness. dirty air or air-borne particles may cause stinging eyes and running nose. these pollutants are hazardous. a notable example is that everyday thousands of people die of lung cancer and asthma caused by air pollution. some people regard the emergence of air pollution as the side effect of the stimulus-encouraged car-buying spree. however, the real blame should be put on the uncontrolled industrial development.
even though the issue whether it is worth sacrificing the environment for the development of economy remains controversial, there is definitely something we can do to save the environment for our own sake, such as taking public transport more often and use renewable energy wherever we can.
相隔不过半米的一位男人和一位女士各自戴着一个大口罩站在雾霾下。他们伸长了脖子，如同在寻找啥。经过困难耐久的调查之后，他们究竟发现站在对面的是一自个。很显着，污浊的雾霾吞没了近在天边的你我。
这幅图讥讽地阐释了空气污染的严峻性。尽管看起来令人心酸，但图中的表象却是日子中的实际。一项由我国环保协会打开的查询标明：我国首要城市的pm2.5均匀值是兴隆国家的几百倍。如此糟糕的空气质量正在挟制着咱们的安康。污染的空气和空中浮游物会致使双眼刺痛、流鼻涕。这些污染物是有损害的。一个显着的比便利是每天都有几千人死于由空气污染引发的肺癌和哮喘。有人将空气污染的呈现视为影响和鼓舞轿车花费的副作用。可是，真实的责任方大约是无控制的工业打开。
尽管关于以牺牲环境为价值来打开经济是不是值得这个疑问仍具有争议性，可是为了自个，咱们必定可以采纳一些办法来解救环境，比方尽量多乘坐公共交通东西以及尽可以地运用可再生动力。
靓词靓语
haze n.霾；霭
side effect 副作用
stretch v.扩展；翻开
illustrate v.阐明；图解
emergence n.呈现；闪现
stimulus n.影响；鼓励
sacrifice v.牺牲；奉献
average a.均匀的；一般的
ironically ad.讥讽地；说反话地
hazardous a.有害的；风险的
靓句分析
①sadly as it is, the phenomenon in the picture is a daily reality.
本句旨在将图像信息与实际情况相联系，既承受上文，又为下文论说环境污染的现状埋下伏笔。该句的亮点是“as”的运用：as引导让步状语从句，标明“尽管，尽管”，从句运用倒装语序，使整个语句简练而不简略。
②however, the real blame should be put on the uncontrolled industrial development.
本
句划线有些可视作模板句式，用于引出构成某一表象或疑问的真实缘由。继上文提出“the stimulus-encouraged carbuying spree”这一表面缘由之后，作者以“however”起句，并选用“the real blame should be put on…”这一规划引出真实的责任方。与“the real reason is…”等平平无奇的表述比较，这种写法更具新意。
③even though the issue whether it is worth sacrificing the environment for the development of economy remains controversial, there is definitely something we can do to save the environment for our own sake, such as taking public transport more often and use renewable energy wherever we can.
本句为结束段，既总结了全文，又深化了主题。even though引导的让步状语从句是对前文中构成空气污染的缘由的重述；主句是对文章主旨的进一步延伸，即呼吁我们从本身启航，维护环境。句尾“such as”引导的短语为具体办法的举例，使作者的呼吁愈加充分有力。结束虽一句成段，但语句规划清楚，层次清楚，且信息表达无缺，是考生仿照的榜样。
源自《写作160篇》
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